Monday, 31 December 2018

Wonka Presents! A story for New Year's Eve

Folks!!  I have outdone myself and it is all for you my dear followers of this humble alright brilliant blog of mine YES I know Owner does help out with bits and bobs- because you all enjoyed the Christmas Advent so much, in consultation (need a lie down now) with said Owner, we have decided you must have my very first Wonka Presents! story for New Year's Eve- and have gone to town and popped it all on here!!  We think it is a perfect tale for the eve and, if you like it, there is a prequel 'Spooky Tale' (which I popped on here last week for you X) and a sequel too, Another tale for New Year's Eve and all of them on the old smashwords.com  to pop you in the mood then..............and folks, Owner made this a grown up story for grown up children., spooky tale is more children and the sequel is a proper ghost story for everyone!!  And, after a bit of thought oh alright and prompting from my best Owner in the entire know world, the final part of the story will be on here tomorrow!! See you on the other side folks and a very furry new year!! XX





Alice surveyed herself and liked what she saw.  Big, buxom, brunette and, despite the stomp of time could move in all the right places.  She winked back at her reflection, dark brown eyes twinkled closed and open, red mouth turned up in a half smile.  Watching herself in the full-length mirror Alice drifted away, her self-admiration complete.  The sudden jarring noise of the doorbell made her start and almost lose her footing.  Her expression in the mirror had momentarily lost its confident pose and folded back somewhat – revealing?  Well she wouldn’t be dwelling on that, no not Alice.

 

The mirror had been there when she moved into her smart little town house.  At the top of the stairs taking you into her living area but awkwardly placed so that you had to stand at a certain angle to see yourself full length, as she had just now, but you were nearly on the top stair before you knew it.  More of a Fen Shui arrangement than any practical one as it caught all the light from the front door which was half glass, and as Alice could see in the mirror had a tall figure standing there.

 

She turned carefully, descended slowly, and shouted ‘Who is it?’ before she reached the small hall way at the bottom of the stairs.  Alice was not beyond keeping this someone on the other side of the door and why on earth this time she opened the door, well who knows indeed why we do the exact opposite to what we had in mind?  Alice was renowned for her stubborn decision-making, her intractable decisions that must not be unmade, changed, renegotiated, at any cost.  She was not hard our Alice, but cold.   Marble-cold.   Smooth, beautiful if somewhat grand and overblown, and could be, might be – plain deadly.

But her visitor was not to know any of this and smiling down at her questioning face introduced himself with a smile that would warm the lonely spirits of his congregation but was wasting itself here.

 

‘Father Merry!’ he exclaimed reaching out for her hand and not finding it simply clasped it with his other.  ‘Thought I would pop round and say hello! And of course invite you to worship – all welcome at the parish of St Mary’s.  I know the lady who comes and cleans for you?  Jean isn’t it – well she happened to mention you the other day and I thought I must go round and ………. ‘Father Merry stopped talking right there and then as he found the door and Alice were trying to move away and close – what was that dreadful word that everyone used now.  She was not engaging, that was it.  And why was she whispering to him?

Now usually, in this situation, Father Merry was patience stretched to infinity, an angel transported to earth to do God’s Will, a missionary who would not fail in getting the Word across to the poor mortals of his parish.  But today, well, even angels need earthly support and Father Merry was feeling offish.  He had been challenged on a point of faith by one of his extremely faithful parishioners and although he had cheerfully steered the argument to its rightful conclusion (the da Vinci code had a lot to answer for) it had confronted him with the doubts that accompany any decent attempt at faith.  Now it seemed he must make another leap of faith towards a closing door and a whispering woman.

 

‘Perhaps you would like to call in to our coffee morning and craft stall event?  I do appreciate you may be a busy woman and of course the time of year – Christmas nearly upon us……’  Well I can’t do more than that thought Father Merry as he posted one of the Church leaflets through the rather snappy letterbox.  He said a small prayer for the Postman and gave the entire door a mean look.  Not his day, no.  Father Merry fought hard against this kind of negative thinking.

‘Thanks for your time then and you take care!’ he spoke loudly and thought he saw a dark shadow through the glass area at the top of the door.  Well if Alice was still there she wasn’t making any sound at all.  Funny though, thought Father Merry, I didn’t hear anything after she closed the door.  Before this train of thought could take hold and have him following it up – he was stubborn too - a friendly shout made him change direction.

It was Jean, one of his favourite parishioners and closer to his heart than he wanted to admit.  When she smiled at him he felt alive and glad to be in the world.  The cold he had been feeling in the doorway closed to him, went.


Jean had seen Father Merry from some way off – in the same way she added something to his day and gave it meaning, it was likewise for her.  She could have picked out his figure from a crowd and she wasn’t given to noticing people.  Ask her for a rundown of her fellow worshippers for instance and you’d be waiting a long time.  The times she had seemingly ignored neighbours and friends simply not seeing them waving at her or shouting hallo.  This was different.  Love she had discovered had a sight of its own, and whether it was the way he turned his head, at an angle it ducked down and to the side and didn’t seem to stay upright for long.  Try as she might she could not pin this movement down except that it pierced her to the heart she thought could never feel anything again.

 

‘Well now’ smiled Father Merry, ‘I was just trying to contact Ms Snood, but –‘and here he paused to laugh at himself and his religious efforts ‘I think I’ve been snubbed!’

 

‘I did warn you Father, she rarely answers the door and I know how you like a challenge, but she really is strange.  I’ve been going in and cleaning for Alice Snood for over 6 months, you know ever since, - ever since….Oh dear I can’t……..’

 

‘Please, it’s alright Jean,’ Father Merry reached out and touched her arm which Jean didn’t draw away from.  She drew strength from him and his Church and clung to it.  Her bereavement, her loss, her yawning chasm, abyss, no, her life it was that had ended that day – to talk of it seemed ridiculous.  To even try and get a hold of the huge thing that swallowed her up when her husband died, it could not be done.  And so, this little cleaning job had been like some sort of raft, steering her away from the grief.  The Church was her island that she could go out to the world from and hide in.  Father Merry knowing this, and never using it, gave his time and church willingly to this need.  Perhaps his faith was better seated than his doubts led him to believe.

 

‘Now you are coming back with me Jean and I will not hear anything different!  I have a puzzle I need help to solve and you are the one to do it.’ Father Merry’s needs asserted themselves now and he took Jean’s arm turning them away from the town house where Alice remained, also hidden, and clinging to a raft of her own.

‘I am trying to write a small history of the Old Town of Hull and have come across some ghosts!  It seems there was a murder and a haunting but blow me if I can’t find out when and where.  What do you think?’

‘I think you should try looking in the High Street where we’ve just been.  In fact try Alice Snood’s house!  No I didn’t mean that really’ Jean had now returned to feeling alright and was laughing up at Father Merry.  He was tall and perhaps that was why he ducked his head down like that – anyway his eyes caught hers, and they shone blue green right at her.  She smiled back, hazel eyes that were pure gold in the sun.   Their crossing time completed in a shared look, as Love not unlike the God that Father Merry worshipped, triumphed as free to roam and settle where it would.  And if the hearts it settled on and in were closed, or otherwise engaged, then this Love would get in there anyway.   Somewhat resigned to this Father Merry at least trusted in God to keep him safe.  Jean just trusted Father Merry.

Together they moved off down the cobblestones of the High Street towards the Church of St Mary’s.  Jean spared one last thought for Alice Snood, and this because it was Christmas coming and even people like her deserved some hope.  Her meanness however took some beating, and she was well known for her bullying ways at work.  Even her family stayed away.  Yes, Alice had fairly well used up all her goodwill.  She was cold, her home was colder and it would take some love to cut through the marble stone that did for her beating heart.


It was the week that followed Christmas that became a crossing time for Alice.  She had as usual enjoyed the season, staying at home and really eating, drinking and sprawling around as she liked.  Her sister Elizabeth had attempted to come round but it was half hearted and anyway she was dealing with a messed up relationship and this demanded all her attention not some of it.  They were not close. 

Alice had never been that kind of a sister, but one for pushing Elizabeth to one side either physically or mentally.  Any chance to undermine her little sister was taken, a well-worn habit, a nastiness that grew bigger over the years.  The only one to challenge this, their father, had died suddenly last New Year.  Alice chose to ignore his death and carried on as if he was just on the other end of a phone, or a day away from her letter.  Just somewhere else.

For Elizabeth, his death was her death.  Stumbling through the days and realising it was nearly a year since that dreadful phone call, she could hardly bear what Alice denied and denied.

 

Swigging down another glass of red wine, Alice put the TV on mute and thought about tucking into the Chocolate log.  Christmas past and New Year’s Eve with all its revelry, well Alice couldn’t be bothered.  She had thought about a party but laziness and pleasuring herself had taken over.

For some reason she remembered Father Merry at the door and the weird moment when she had actually opened the door.  What would she have said she wondered to herself?  And like a dream, the words came out in a tiny whisper.  But really she hadn’t meant to say a word.  She remembered closing the door but not much else.

No matter, it was her house, her hiding place.  ‘Cold though tonight, I must turn the heating up’ and Alice finally got up from the settee to do this.   The phone was ringing, oh what a bore thought Alice, someone ringing up because it’s New Year’s Eve.


At home in the little annexe to the Church, Father Merry was on the phone.  Since the day they had (engaged?) met in the High Street, they spoke daily and met when they could.  It was the start of a friendship that would strengthen his love of God and give Jean back her beating heart, but just now neither of them knew this, just that it was a good thing.  They spoke of this and that and then, Father Merry announced his ‘find’.  He had finally found the reference to the murder, not far from the Church, and probably on the site of Alice Snood’s smart little townhouse.   ‘And yes Jean I know! How exciting!

‘I can’t say I’m surprised, ‘Jean paused to think back over her uncomfortable moments in that house. ‘For a start I always felt cold, especially in the hallway – and I’ve just thought of it now, but the mirror at the top of the stairs – I once thought I saw someone in it – you know like a shadow of a – of an old man it was’.

They spoke some more and agreed that they would both visit Alice in the morning, wish her a Happy New Year, and investigate.  Jean had already decided to end the cleaning job with her, this being her resolution.  She had enjoyed the holiday from it and had used the time to evaluate.  She remembered her last visit to clean for Alice.  The tenner under the clock.  No card or note to wish her a happy Christmas.   The bottle of bleach she tipped down the toilet hoping the smell would vanquish the other smell.  A sort of damp, slightly rotten smell.   Lastly, Jean remembered the stairs and the hallway.  It was here that she felt the need to get out as fast as she could.  An irrational fear, there was nothing to see.  So, Jean’s resolution was set. 

Father Merry would not say what his was.  He wished her a good night and sat in the darkness preparing to pray.  The dark and the quiet enfolded him.  The crossing time of one year to the next moved closer.


Alice too had gone to the phone.    It had rung and rung whilst she was adjusting the thermostat and whoever it was, wasn’t giving up easily.  She never did find out who it was though.   Pausing by the mirror at the top of the stairs, for this small landing housed the phone too, she again saw the shadow glance across the mirror.  Her father had stood here just before she pushed him down the stairs.  Before he fell, fell properly, bouncing round and over and cracking his skull open on the bottom stair, he had caught sight of his oldest daughter in the mirror.  His last words, and Alice knew what they were only too well because she had knelt down close to hear them, were ‘’help me’.

‘Oh shut up Dad’ said Alice.  It was unfortunate then that he did not.  She knew it had been him opening the door that day and him making her speak.  He was here now, waiting.  

 

Elizabeth, on the other end of a phone that just rang and rang, shivered as a cold draught rushed at her and overhead, rocking the paper shade and swinging the lightbulb.  Rather like her soul had lifted out of her in some protest.   She gave up ringing in the end.  I’ll tell Alice about my dream another time she thought and went to write it down instead.  Although she didn’t think she’d forget seeing her father push Alice down the stairs – for some reason this had made here feel better not sad at all.  Perhaps I’m moving on she thought.  Her crossing time begun.

 

Alice lay and watched and listened.  The phone stopped and in any case could not be answered now.  All she could do was watch the slow tread of her father coming down the stairs to the small hallway where she lay wedged against the door.   ‘Help me’ she whispered.

 

‘I’m coming’ he replied.

 

The End


Wonka looked over at me.  ‘I liked it all barring the soppy bits’ he declared.  I thought I’d done alright considering I’d updated it especially for New Year’s Eve.  It had been written a long time ago, and was just lying around on the computer waiting to be told.   I’d always had a fascination for haunted Hull and had my own ghostly experience there to tell of.  ‘Do you think,’ I wondered aloud to Wonka, ‘that we shall ever tell a story to rival the famous ones?’  Of course I was referring to our hero Mr Charles Dickens who could hardly have known at the time, how his Christmas Carol would continue on down all the years.

‘What like a New Year’s Eve Carol?’ Wonka gave me a hard look. 

‘Just something to remember us by then…’  I had called the story ‘The Crossing Time’ as this was the theme.   If Mr Dickens were here now, he might call it…………

‘He might call it a bit of an alright story thank you very much!  Wonka Presents!’ and I suppose Wonka was right, barring the soppy bits…..at least he let me tell it.

‘Did you get the digestion tablets and the dental floss?’ was Wonka’s parting shot before bed.  Oh yes!  I had even broken out and bought a new hot water bottle.

 

Settling down with a sherry, and him with his new luxury anti everything biscuits, I watched the old year move towards the new one.  It could be our best year yet.

 

Happy New Year to each and every one!!

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